Indie Ink: For the love of guppies

Jessica bent down to look in the tanks along the floor. Bright colored fish darted back and forth, zipping in and out amongst the clumps of anemone. She placed a finger on the glass and grinned as the small school paused to investigate.

“TJ,” she called. “Can we get some of these fish?” TJ looked up from the selection of tanks displayed near the front of the store. He walked over and read the writing on the side of the tank.

“It says these fish need salt water, Jess.” He helped her up. “I’m not ready to do a salt water tank. Let’s just stick to tropical, okay?”

Jess sighed and waved goodbye to the fish. “Okay. So what fish can we buy?”

She followed TJ to another section of tanks with a variety of fish swimming about. He read over the names written on the glass. “Most of these would be okay. We need to make sure none of them get too big for the tank.”

TJ spoke to a sullen young man slumped over the front counter. “Excuse me, could you help us out?” The kid looked over and grunted, then shuffled slowly towards them.

“Yeah? You know what fish ya want?”

TJ consulted his list of fish names and scanned the tanks. He pointed out a few. “Will these be okay together?”

The kid shrugged. “Yeah, I think so.” TJ took a deep breath, sucking back a retort. He didn’t want to make a scene.

“Alright, could I get ten of the red mollies, five of the blue tailed ones, ten fancy guppies…” he paused as the kid began scooping fish out. Jessica watched with interest before wandering down the aisle and checking out other tanks. She stopped in front of one at the end.

“TJ,” she beckoned. “Come over here. What about this fish? He looks lonely.”

TJ left the kid with the guppy tank and joined her. A solitary silver fish, no bigger than a quarter, swam lazily about the tank. His scales almost glittered and the tips of his fins were bright red. He was beautiful to watch.

TJ pursed his lips. “Hey,” he said to the kid. “Can this fish go with the other ones I bought?” The kid ambled over, his arms laden with three plastic bags filled with water and fish. He read the side of the tank where the fish’s name and price was written.

“It says this is a silver dollar. They’re fine with these usually but they can get big. Make sure you have a good sized tank.”

“It’s a forty gallon,” TJ reassured him. The kid nodded and grabbed a net to scoop out the solitary fish. The bag was passed over to Jessica who held it up to observe her new pet.

“I think I’ll call him George Lucas,” she announced. TJ barked a laugh.

“That guy who did Star Wars? Why?”

“Cause he’s glittery, like a star. And he’s the color of Lucas’ beard,” Jessica said defensively. TJ just shrugged and followed the kid up to the front to pay.

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A few weeks later TJ found Jessica perched in front of the tank her mouth moving soundlessly. She brought a finger up and touched it to the glass a number of times.

“What are you doing?” he asked. Jessica turned with a start.

“Oh! Hi, I didn’t hear you come home.” She turned back to the tank and a crease formed between her brows. “I’m counting,” she said, answering his question. “I swear there are fewer fish but it’s hard to tell. They keep swimming around.”

Her eyes lit up as George Lucas appeared from behind a rack. TJ shook his head at Jessica’s love for that creature. She wiggled a finger at the sleek silver fish.

“He’s gotten bigger already, don’t you think?”

TJ took a closer look at George. He frowned. The fish did look much larger, almost double the size from when they got him.

“What are you feeding him?” He asked. She grabbed a bottle of flake food off the top of the tank.

“Just this stuff. Same as I’m feeling the other fish.”

TJ shrugged. “Maybe he’s eating more of it than the rest of them.” He watched George loop around the tank and head back towards the school of mollies and fancy guppies. The fish scattered upon his approach and TJ saw George veer off and follow one of the smaller guppies into a clump of plants.

“Oh crap,” he said. Jessica glanced over at him, her eyes questioning. “Grab a net, Jess. I think George Lucas has developed a taste for guppy!”

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For the IndieInk Writing Challenge this week, Mediocre Wayne challenged me with “George Lucas has gone insane and must be stopped.” and I challenged Eliza M. Green with “I had committed a cardinal sin of celebration…I had regifted”

Blogger’s Note: When I was trying to write this piece I was a little stumped. I didn’t want to do an obvious George Lucas/Star Wars kind of story. My husband asked what my prompt was and when I told him we did a bit of bouncing ideas off each other. Then he grabbed my laptop and wrote something within 5 minutes. His little story influenced mine above. For your reading pleasure, I’m posting it below :)

As always, concrite welcome.

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Joel stood perched beside the old, gray tree with twisted branches. As a child he spent carefree days swinging from its branches, talking with Gordon about the girls they would date and maybe even eventually marry. The intergalactic-3-planet war came and Gordon got drafted; he never did get to have a bride. As a child he loved Princess Leia, as all warm-blooded American boys did. In memory of his friend, Joel named his most beloved pet after the creator of his best friend’s love.

George Lucas floated almost lifelessly in his jar. His mouth opened and closed in a steady rhythm. Joel rubbed the side of the jar and whispered softly, “Soon, my friend. Very soon”.

The fingers of moonlight finally stretched through the branches and gripped Joel’s face. He looked down at George and smiled.

The time for killing had come.

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A Substitute

Saerolyn crouched in the corner, her cloak wrapped tightly around her, as if its threadbare fabric could serve as protection from the chaotic activity in the lodge.The hard packed dirt floor was icy on her bare feet. She tried to tuck her cloak around them as well but its ragged edges thwarted her efforts.

Voices filled the room; harsh barking sounds of a language foreign to her ears. She let her matted locks fall forward, screening her face and any observations she made of the people around her. People milled about the large open space of the lodge. Servants scampered through the crowds bearing food and drink or firewood. Women slinked along the edges, some trying to entice the men into closer contact; others working to make themselves invisible. To her left stood the man who had accompanied the massive fur clothed warriors who had found her in the forest. He’d tried to soothe her fears on their journey but his words had fallen on deaf ears. Her focus had been the emptiness she endured: the emptiness of her body, the emptiness of her arms, and the emptiness of her heart.

Out of the corner of her eye she could see him watching her, every few seconds inching closer, his hand reaching out to comfort then dropping in hesitation. She had no use for his comfort. He couldn’t give her what she needed with his words. Her stomach clenched, twisting in pain, and she grimaced. Memories flickered through her mind: the hulking men garbed in furs looming over her; pale, blue-tinged skin; the overturned earth. She clutched her now sagging stomach and felt the tears begin to cascade down her cheeks anew. In response to her aching belly, her breasts began to throb and expand, her nipples growing tight against the thin homespun. She could feel the cloth grow damp.

A hand on her shoulder brought her head up like a shot, the hair being tossed out of her face. The man crouched down, his gaze filled with sadness.

“Are you okay?” He whispered. She nodded tightly, struggling to control the wave of grief that was ripping through her. He glanced over his shoulder towards the far end of the room. The enormous stone hearth was located there and most of the warriors gathered near its warmth. The two who had come upon Saerolyn in the woods stood off to one side, deep in conversation with a regal looking man leaning comfortably in an over-sized wooden throne. Even from this distance, Saerolyn could tell that he was only half listening to whatever his men were reporting.

Upon arrival to the camp, Saerolyn had been marched past the man on the throne and she’d seen a grief not unlike her own etched into his features. She wondered for a moment what had made this man so sad before her own grief  dominated her thoughts once again.

A shout echoed through the hall. The man who spoke Saerolyn’s language looked up and watched as one of the warriors he translated for gestured at him and yelled out an order. The man stood and pulled Saerolyn up along with him. She glanced over before casting her eyes to the ground.

“The prince wishes to speak with you. Come.” He gripped her elbow and guided her through the throng of unwashed bodies. Saerolyn quivered, her knees threatening to give way. She knew there were only a few possible roles for her as a captive: servant or prostitute. The man continued to speak, casting his voice low so it only reached her ears.

“He is possibly not really a prince, but it is the closest word in our language to what he is called in theirs. Speak clearly when he asks you a question. I will translate his words for you and your responses to him. Do not look him directly in the eye; it is not proper for women to be bold. Do not look down to the ground either.”

Saerolyn looked at him, questioning. “Where do I look then?” He paused and considered her query before answering.

“Look at his chest, at the amulet around his neck. That is where his warriors look.” He smiled at her, trying to ease her fears but failed. Saerolyn bit her lip and fought back the tears that threatened to flood her eyes. He tried again to distract her.

“What is your name?”

“Saerolyn,” she whispered. He smiled again and extended a finger to gently coil around a lock of her hair.

“Sun of the Morning,” he said. “A fitting name, considering your hair. It looks just like a blazing sunrise.” As they approached the throne he whispered a final missive. “Be easy, Sun of the Morning. They will not hurt you.”

Saerolyn stilled her features as they stopped in front of the prince. Up close his face was more haggard than she thought and his eyes were strained with pain. But even so, he emanated power. She could feel his strength, his physical presence, radiating off him. He shifted in his seat and looked Saerolyn over before addressing her companion. His words, though in the angry, sharp language that grated on her ears were given in a softer, yet commanding tone. Saerolyn’s translator was unable to hide the surprise on his face. He turned towards her and gestured towards the prince.

“He sends his sympathies to you on the loss of your child.”

Saerolyn was unable to control her grief at his words. She collapsed to the ground and sobbed. Her breast began to leak in earnest and she felt the front of her dress become soaked. The translator took a hesitant step towards her but stopped as the two hulking warriors stationed on either side moved towards Saerolyn. Each took one of her arms and helped her up to her feet. The prince watched it all, his face a stone mask but his eyes shared her pain. At once, Saerolyn understood he too had lost someone dear to him.

The prince spoke again to the translator. Saerolyn heard her own name in the translator’s answer. The prince nodded and then spoke directly to her.

“My men will escort you to my private tents. There you will find food and clothing.” Her language was harsh on his tongue and came out haltingly, the words stumbling over each other. She never expected to hear one of these fierce warriors speak to her in her own language and her shock allowed his men to grasp her by and arm and take her from the hall.

The prince’s tents were placed away from the main camp, protected from the smells of unwashed bodies and cook fires. The warriors pushed her within then closed the flaps. Inside she found clothing and food as he promised. Her fingers trembled as she peeled off her dress, the damp material clinging to her body. The skirts were stained and stiff from blood and fluid. She stepped out of them and used a small bowl of water to clean herself as best she could.

Her breasts throbbed as they filled with milk, milk that had no purpose anymore. She bent her head and let the grief overcome her. Her body wracked with sobs. She wrapped her arms around her belly and felt the muscles within contracting. Exhausted, she curled up into a ball on the floor, her cloak serving as a blanket, and fell asleep.

The sound of yelling woke Saerolyn abruptly. She scrambled to her feet and pulled the cloak around her naked body. She watched as the tent flap opened and the prince entered. He stopped at the sight of her. For an instant they remained motionless, Saerolyn forgetting the translator’s warning about making eye contact as she searched the prince’s eyes. He broke contact with a grunt and a gesture to her to sit. She lowered herself to a low bench and waited for him to speak.

“I need…you.” He said haltingly. “Help me, please?”

“What do you need?” she asked, her curiosity overcoming her fear. He spoke an abrupt command at the door to the tent and within minutes a woman entered, a bundle in her arms. The cry of a baby floated up from the bundle and Saerolyn felt her breasts begin to leak in response. The woman went directly to her and deposited the child into her arms. Shocked, Saerolyn looked over to the prince.

“She is hungry. Will you feed her?” He asked, his voice pleading. “Her mother died and the goat’s milk makes her sick.” He took a step towards them. “Please, she is all I have now.”

Saerolyn’s heart began to pound in her chest. She gazed down at the baby in her arms and smiled. She couldn’t replace this little girl’s mother, nor could this baby replace her own lost child, but for now they could serve as substitutes. Instinctively, Saerolyn brought the baby up to her breast and guided her frantically moving mouth towards a nipple already leaking milk down her chest. She watched the baby suckle, her eyes half closing in content.

“Hush, a leanbh, Mama’s here.”

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Story DamYou are suddenly (and unexpectedly) thrust into the position of substitute—indefinitely. Give us the details. Do you survive or is your next wardrobe purchase a straightjacket? Limit 1800 words

I’m not sure if I exactly followed the prompt but this was what popped into my head when I was thinking of substitute. The original piece is a LOT longer…like double the allowed word count . It’s amazing where your imagination will take you :)

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Story Dam: Regifting

It’s not easy being me. Oh, you think I exaggerate? Are YOU size XL boxers with big blue whales over them? No? Exactly.

It’s difficult enough being boxers of any kind but XL? You’re really limited to who may buy you. I’ve watched my friends on the rack, the confident size S, the spunky size M, heck even size L has it pretty good. There are some fine lookin’ men coming in to buy those pairs (what, you thought since I was a pair of boxers I’d be male? No honey, I’m all lady). But XL? I get the huge sweaty dudes pawing at me. Gross.

But I didn’t lose hope. And one day…she came in. At first I was a tad disappointed it was a woman buying me. But she was an attractive woman; the odds were good she was married to someone good looking, even if he might be bigger.

I waited in breathless anticipation during the entire car ride home only to be shoved into a bottom drawer! The nerve! But, it was better than the rack at the store. So I curled up and waited until that drawer was pulled open and I was pulled hurriedly out of the bag. This was it! My moment!…Or not. I tried to see my potential new owner only to be shoved in a box!

So I waited…again…are you seeing a pattern here? I wait around A LOT. Luckily this wait wasn’t long. I could hear my box being ripped open, I pasted on a huge welcoming grin (yes, I can grin…you just have to look really close) and saw…another girl. A skinny one. Frowning at me. She held me up against her body and said, “Seriously? Who gives boxers?”

I don’t blame her. I think two of her might have fit in me. Not the most thoughtful gift. I watched as she shoved me back into the box and I was forgotten again.

Later that evening she pulled me out and showed me to her boyfriend (he was hot but even he couldn’t wear me…sigh…those lucky size M’s, they get all the hotties).

“Can you believe someone put boxers in the Christmas exchange? What an ass.”

“I bet it was your brother.” The guy replied. The girl smiled slyly.

“I have an idea,” she grinned. “I’ll take the boxers around places with me, take pictures of them at school, at the mall, everywhere! I’ll make a scrap book and regift them at next year’s exchange. It’ll be hilarious!”

Even I had to smile at that idea. So clever! And I’d get to see the world. It was no “hugging-a-hottie’s-ass” but it would do. The stories I could tell my fellow boxers….I’d be famous!

I was placed in a drawer again but it wouldn’t be for long. Soon I would get to see all these places I heard the people talking about as they shopped in my store: the movies, university, parks, playgrounds…I couldn’t wait!

But wait I did…for a whole year. No trips, no photos. Eventually I was pulled out and hurriedly shoved into yet another box, wrapped up, and given away…and once again I was opened up and looked at with scorn.

“Seriously? Who put this into the exchange??”

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Story DamYou get to play the part of the gift (Mwah ha ha!) Write a piece in which you, the gift, have fulfilled your destiny—to be given to someone… only they don’t want you. Good luck!

 

Oh and FYI, this is based on a REAL story. Not the talking boxer part, but how they were given ;)

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Love

Trifecta challenged us to write a love story in 33 words exactly.

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At first, it is easy. Life moves forward.

Then, there are changes. Subtle at first but soon more apparent.

Changes lead to pain. Excruciating but worth it.

Finally in your arms is love.

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Back to the Cave

image from Words n Sync

Rachel tumbled to the ground, landing hard on the sand. She pushed herself up to her knees, the pale brown sand giving way under her hands. She looked around confused. One moment she’d been at the jail talking to Nathan and now she was here. Her eyes widened. The cave.

She struggled to her feet and walked towards the light. Was that it? Was her wish done? The scent of rotting seaweed and creosote soaked wood assaulted her nostrils. She stumbled over a dune of sand hidden in the dim light and caught herself on the edge of the cave wall. The dampness of the rock soaked into the sleeve of her shirt. She shivered at the clamminess on her skin.

The opening of the cave was just ahead. She could feel warm air being blown in from the beach. Eager to escape the chill air of the cave she quickened her steps…only to crash into…something. She placed her hands up and felt an invisible wall directly in front of her. Rachel shook her head and began slamming her hands against the barrier.

“Let me out!” she screamed. “Help! Help!”

“For goodness sakes Rachel!” An angry voice floated out of the darkness. Rachel turned and pressed herself up against the invisible wall.

“Who’s there?” she asked, her voice quivering. A large, oval shaped glow appeared near the back of the cave. A glow Rachel was all too familiar with now. “Mirror? Is that you?”

“Well, of course it’s me! Blimey, who’d you think it was?” Rachel drew closer and saw her reflection materialize in a much larger full length mirror.

“Where’s the hand mirror?”

“It’s here,” she replied, gesturing the edges of the mirror she was in. “I get a little chuffed being looked down upon all the time. At least this way we’re looking eye to eye.”

Rachel sat down on a pile of driftwood. “So, where am I?”

“In the cave, of course.”

“But…why? What happened?”

The Mirror sighed. “The wished ended, Rachel. You told Nathan you loved him and he just dismissed you. So poof, back here you come.”

“So it’s over?” Rachel asked, a sad catch in her voice. She felt her shoulders slump in defeat.

“No, not if you don’t want it to. I can send you to another reality, give it another go.”

“Really?” Rachel’s faced brightened. Thoughts of Nathan danced through her mind. “I’ll do it much better this time, I’m sure I will!” She began pacing. “I’ll be more mature this time. Cooler, sexy, alluring. He won’t know what hit him!”

The Mirror rolled her eyes.

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This piece is inspired by the Words n Sync prompt: Use the image (above) and tell us of a holiday adventure. A special memory or a dream of somewhere your character wants to go.


Write On Edge: Red-Writing-Hood
I also used the Red Writing Hood prompt this week. We were to take an honest look in our writing toolbox and pull out one of the tools we believe needs a little polishing: dialogue or character development, narrative description or setting, plot advancement or denouement.

For me, I find doing descriptions of places so you can really feel like you are there is my weakness so I tried to show you the cave a little better. Did it work?

 

FYI: this follows directly after my last Rachel piece, Confessions

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