Comments for Views From Nature http://viewsfromnature.com Diagonally Parking in a Parallel Universe Mon, 21 May 2012 21:32:57 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ Comment on #100WordSong: Tasks by Tara R. http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/16/100wordsong-tasks/comment-page-1/#comment-4473 Mon, 21 May 2012 21:32:57 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2466#comment-4473 That was cool! Just keeps getting more and more fun.

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Lance http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4472 Mon, 21 May 2012 16:21:35 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4472 wrong…it was great. I read your stuff at least 3 or 4 times each. thats a compliment

]]> Comment on 100 Word Challenge: Protector by Carrie http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/15/100-word-challenge-protector/comment-page-1/#comment-4471 Mon, 21 May 2012 16:09:08 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2461#comment-4471 pop vampires in the search box and they should all pop up ;)

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Carrie http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4470 Mon, 21 May 2012 15:47:12 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4470 Hmmm, three times? That doesn’t sound good ;)

Thanks for the comments. Always appreciated

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Lance http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4469 Sun, 20 May 2012 23:08:04 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4469 Ok, now that I’ve read this three times…

This is a really good episode because of the emotional heft. I like the last 150 words. Great job, Carrie.

]]> Comment on 100 Word Challenge: Protector by Velvet Verbosity (@velvetverbosity) http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/15/100-word-challenge-protector/comment-page-1/#comment-4468 Sun, 20 May 2012 18:09:40 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2461#comment-4468 Uh oh, going to have to go back and see what I’m missing. ;)

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Denise http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4467 Sat, 19 May 2012 18:21:12 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4467 Such a magical piece with vivid imagery. One of my favorite lines was: “Her voice was a soothing caress to my troubled spirit.”

I do agree with some of the concrits about the flow. I had to go over a couple of parts a few times to try to understand, but I don’t know this story that well so that could be some of the problem, too.

Either way, your wording was beautiful. And it was nice to hear that sibling rivarly is not just a part of the human world :)

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Carrie http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4466 Sat, 19 May 2012 17:59:05 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4466 woot! you did get the name right LOL

thanks for reading

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Carrie http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4465 Sat, 19 May 2012 17:58:36 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4465 thank you for your critique. You always have suggestions to make the writing better. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment :)

]]> Comment on Red Writing Hood: Taking Charge by Carrie http://viewsfromnature.com/2012/05/17/red-writing-hood-taking-charge/comment-page-1/#comment-4464 Sat, 19 May 2012 17:57:26 +0000 http://viewsfromnature.com/?p=2476#comment-4464 thank you

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